Diary Entry: Thursday 3rd November

We now have new footage of our narrative. We have re-filmed the travelling part for the homeless man; it now looks far more colourful, and is from more interesting angles. The editing speed has increased, through different angles of the same shot being interwoven together. A faster editing pace was one of the improvements that we wanted from our rough cut video. Whilst Iona and I edit, Katie and Laura are planning future filming and finishing the audience research. We took into acount all of the points that were suggested to us after our orignal rough cut of the video, and hopefully will not make the same mistakes in filming this time around.